This story has immense potential, writing wise it is very good. Pacing is kind of off sometimes and either needs to slow down in some cases, or is just going too fast. These are just minor things that the author can get better at quickly. As for update stability I cant say much yet as there are only 4 chaps. Worldbuilding is solid along with character design. Cheers!
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