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HATEMESOFTLY
HATEMESOFTLYLv11yr
2023-06-25 07:59

I firstly wanna say that the overall idea of the story is fine. The translation is also fine. And I also wanna say that I am definitely not a writer and I know how hard it is to write something especially something original. So I'll just start by saying I don't really like the protagonist. She's really boring and just seems like a mashup of every op Mary Su character. The antagonist are really unbelievable! Ye ting is really annoying, but it's even more annoying the way the protagonist does nothing about her. I don't know if she handles Ye ting, I haven't made it that far. I'm on ch250+ and it drags so much it's a little boring. Another person I don't like is Chu Haun. I don't know what it's like to be reunited with a sibling after finding out the other sister wasn't your biological sister, but the way he acts is really annoying! I wanna know how old is the protagonist for her to be so unfazed by everything people do or say. And then there's the family. Are they an after thought? It's like they're just a stepping stone for Chu Ning. To make her look good or get her out of situations so she doesn't seem too op. It doesn't make sense to have 7 capable brothers but yet look at the life they live? Yeah they all are gonna be big shots, but that was on their own. Now it's like everything they achieve is because of Chu Ning. I just find it a little unnecessary. I also saw someone say that this protagonist isn't op. What story did you read? Not only does she know the future events but she also super smart and knows how to fight and she's outstandingly beautiful and has an amazing talent in cooking and business. If this isn't op I wanna know what is

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Lazy_Bitch13
Lazy_Bitch13Lv10

I just read midway of chapter 2 and I dropped it real quick. That part where she thoughts that she has to come back to her original family because her 7 brothers will be big shot in the future and she can manipulate the real daughter family like a small bug. Like what kind of thoughts was this? First of all it's not her real family and she was so entitled to his 7 brothers achievement. It's their achievement and not yours.

ZoMeow
ZoMeowLv4

She didn't do anything at all. She helped every brothers Gave up her apps for her 4th brother. Who doesn't even know and still hate her till the last. This novel wamted to glorify her. But it is impossible As she is worse thn villain

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