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dylan_pyle
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2023-06-08 07:13

it's pretty good so far,I like what you included half empty,half full and the MC using logic rather than emotion.i do suggest the author look at greed:all for what.the way the author explains things and uses metaphors and such.Also congratulations for bit making the MC a simp.gremiry family remind of uchirla from narto how hate springs from love.

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dylan_pyle
dylan_pyleLv14

that said the updates are really slow or should I say nonexistent.*not a simp

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