I love OP characters but this.... He's just an OP guy that likes to pretend to be a wise man when he's a complete degen. Don't get me wrong I like the fact that the 'disciples' are taking fate into their own hands, but what irks me is that every single one of them is a female in love with the MC for no apparent reason. I mean, Did Nami fall in love with Luffy in the original story just because he saved her? No, she respected him, not loved him. I get that this is a power wish fulfilment type of novel but why be so round about with the disciple thing? Why not be honest and just say that they're all his love interests? I was hoping that reading more would help me find a male disciple who changes his fate and doesn't have to be a female to sell their body to the MC, but as you can see, I am disappointed. TLDR: MC only takes female disciples and every single one of them loves him for some nonsense reason. Also, grammar might be less than satisfactory, but overall, an ok wish fulfilment fanfic if that is what you're going for.
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simple this is a translation of a Chinese novel which if you have read any should know that most fall into the category of trash with things like op mc to the point of matchless since the start and all females falling for mc like BOTs and other characters reduced to the ones who say wow, OMG, ETC...
what do you expect from a teacher-system novel? all similar novel I've read so far always have master-disciple relationships, and it always ended up a harem
you know the name of Fanfiction in Chinese ? can you please tell me
On the note of LuffyxNami, Luffy is plain stu pid
are all the disciples romantically involved with the mc ?
This guy is a disciple
luffy is ugly af so Nami keeps it to respect, dunno yet if mc is handsome or not but reviews have intrigued me let's see
