Review Detail of Kyran_Ambrosius in Naruto: Isshiki Otsutsuki

The story seems alright so far (saying this from chapter 1) for the most part it just needs some editing. (☆Ф∇Ф☆)(☆Ф∇Ф☆)(☆Ф∇Ф☆)(☆Ф∇Ф☆)(☆Ф∇Ф☆)(☆Ф∇Ф☆)