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Azraelich
AzraelichLv122yr
2022-08-02 12:44

Interesting book. Eloquent and well-phrased writing. Concept, and plot of story is interesting and keeps the reader wanting to know more. However, this novel does have a glaring issue in the fact that it is extremely similar to the novel ’My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires’ to the point that it could be seen as the vanilla kiddy version of the novel. This applies to the harem, world building, circumstances (the turning of the two protagonists into vampires was almost exactly the same, with the harem-to-be partaking.) However, this didn’t really influence the reading experience (well at least my experience.) and is still overall a nicely done book and is enjoyable to read. 4.3/5 ~Azraelich

My Vampire Little Sister

Yunniye_Snow
4.3
203 Chs

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Devin_Johnson_1628
Devin_Johnson_1628Lv15

I had those vibes the moment I read the name and saw the cover art. I just hope the writing quality is on par with that novel because that’s what I read Victor’s story for

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Yunniye_Snow
Yunniye_SnowAuthor

Hi! This is the author here! Thank you for reading or planning to pick up this story! I really appreciate it whether it's a view, a comment or a power stone. You reading and engaging with this story is what gives authors like me motivation to keep writing. Cheers, and hope you enjoy the story!

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ShamelessGengar
ShamelessGengarLv1

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!

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Drsanders
DrsandersLv11

don't have the patience to find whatever semblance of a good story, but I'm utterly bored even after the introduction of the little sister. the writing hasn't really caught my interest with any uniqueness or just great quality, the premise isn't anything special, actually bordering on cliche on multiple levels, and there's a huge lack of any world building to the point where this setting is indistinguishable between many novels similar to this. this could have potential to be okay but as a veteran reader you have to catch my eye early and in every aspect available, this didn't. I guess this is a harsh review but I figured I'd put in my two cents rather than another meat riding "5 stars, this is soooo good my favorite story" review.

2yr
DriftingDragon
DriftingDragonLv13

Really good 👍!! I read it on Scribble Hub, I didn’t know it was on Webnovel already😵‍💫. Great start [img=update] Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

2yr
Ayce_o_Spade
Ayce_o_SpadeLv15

For anyone that wants to know there is #YURI in this novel.

1yr
Thunderclap1942
Thunderclap1942Lv4

The novel is great it had a good start the main character have a good personality at the beginning I hope you continue writing this novel it have a good potential

2yr
Jetboy76
Jetboy76Lv15

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Manmeet_Singh_8886
Manmeet_Singh_8886Lv14

Thanks for writing this masterpiece dear Author. I really loved first volume of story. Cute fluffy moments with sister and grit of mc. Hopefully we would get to see wits of mc too in coming volumes as he is research enthusiast with me being in same field. Although story is clearly inspired from 'My three beautiful Vampire Wives' and 'Little Tyrant doesn't want to meet a bad end' I am happy you have kept mc outgoing and braver in relationships and romance unlike in Little Tyrant novel. Also I hope it will gradually settle into its own unique plot. Please it's my only request that please don't drop this novel and give it a completion as this is my first time I would be supporting you and your novel from such an infancy stage🥺 Also i would love if you could update more regularly with pace of atleast 7Ch/week Thanks a lot again😊

2yr
Drew_Sansone
Drew_SansoneLv15

Beginning of the novel has huge inspiration from “My three vampire wives are beautiful”. It’s not a copy paste and delves into it’s own master-crafted experience that has it’s laughs at the right time, and the lore enough to keep you hooked and mysterious but not info dumping. Thank you as of chapter 90 for the experience author. I‘d love to see where this goes

2yr
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