I'm not picky about the quality of writing - 5 stars. the author updates often lately, so - 5 stars. In the development of the story, we are currently only 12 chapters in and the MC has only been alive in that world for a few days, so he has not done anything significant apart from killing the beast: 5 stars. the character design, well, in this part, it is basically Itachi in the body of a child that he failed to grow, but itachi's experiences and mindset allow him to seize opportunities and survive dangers - 5 stars. the world fund, at 12 chapters we didn't see almost anything of this, except the sect, the people, but since we are going 12 chapters it is understood, 5 stars. I'm not harsh with the review because it's a story that has just begun, while it progresses and more chapters are uploaded, I could edit this, I've read many Itachi FFs and most of them have disappointed me, expectations are present in this fanfic.
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Hey bud, thank you so much for the kind words!! I will do my best to live up to your expectations and produce a satisfactory story. Iv noticed alot of itachi fan fics tend to stray away from itachis character, in this novel im trying my best to live up to his goated character and make it make sense. Thank you again!
Just to let you know, i have started the Itachi novel again. I am improving it as we speak ans have planned a decent plot. Would be great to have you back man.
