1. 1st thing fast, Widen quality, For honesty pretty bad like an ally but not that bad for me, 2 hate this book. 2. Another improvement you should try, Is improving, To change the way you organize your pages. In simple words you have good characters. But the story line is so messed up I don't know what chapter it's talking about the characters or how you met became what you became. So yeah, Need some improvement of your Organizing the development. 3. And The final,Isaac about this book. The lack of detail.
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