Review Detail of Rachel_Dewinata in Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System

A mess. Extremely self indulgent. Power scaling is basically destroyed since the very start. Characters are all over the place. The world building is an ugly mess shoved down everybody's throat without any basic foundation of it, basically "Just imagine it" with no base whatsoever, ridiculous. Characters also felt dead, no development between them, they have no characteristics aside for being "awesome". Got a headache reading it, it dampen my mood to read. An absolute mess. If this is a food, it has all the A-tier ingredients, but the cook had no effing idea how to cook so he just toss everything into the pan, fire it up to the max, and just stir it up until it became a charcoal that not even dogs want to eat. Disappointed.