Item: Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System
Rating: 4
Author: traveler_dream

traveler_dreamLv11yr

2023-02-20 11:34

"Origin Court: Accepting Disciples with a System" is an intriguing novel with an interesting premise. The concept of a system to help a protagonist grow and become powerful is not new, but the author manages to give it a fresh spin in this story. The protagonist's journey as he navigates the challenges of the Origin Court is engaging and the world-building is well done. The cultivation system in the novel is also well-explained and easy to follow. However, there are some issues with the pacing of the story, particularly in the early chapters where there seems to be a rush to get to the more action-packed scenes. Additionally, some of the characters feel underdeveloped and lack depth, making it difficult to connect with them on an emotional level. Overall, "Origin Court: Accepting Disciples with a System" is a decent read for fans of cultivation novels, but it could benefit from some improvements in character development and pacing.

Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System

thefirespeaks

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Hello, there! Author here! Hear me out, you guys. If you hate a main character that kills without reason right off the bat, from the earlier chapters of the story until at most a hundred and ten, then this novel is not for you. That's because I wanna leave some gap for him to realize what he was doing all this time, given his previous life on Earth—being some type of villain. No matter how he said he's gonna change his ways, he can't do that overnight as it's engraved in his soul—the way how he always did things on Earth—plus the fact that he grew old with those ways. Relate this kind of characterization to your habits. They're not gonna change instantly just because you tried changing them or by saying you'd change them. He's a hypocrite and so are we. Be realistic. You're too fed up with your type of main characters who is smart or wise at the beginning of the story. If you like such type of novels, then again, Origin Court is not for you to read. As for his overpowered strength, do you think he's strong because his system has a bug or he's just one of those protagonists who become strong for nothing? Really? Think it over. Moreover, don't be an idiot to think that this is a weak-to-strong novel, because I saw a review here that said that. I deleted it because it wasn't helpful at all. Also, let's talk about the "romance" in this story. There are barely few of them of which most are coming from the side characters, just fillers. The main character himself, on the other hand, never liked having lovers from the start because he grew old on Earth without marrying. There is a reason for that as well. It was vaguely mentioned actually, if you got what I tried to imply there. Otherwise, I must have failed to write it properly. Nevertheless, I just want to say these things. All in all, this novel will matter in terms of your reading preference.

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IMPORTANT NOTICE! I know that I did not update the story for about two months now. However, I promise that I'll get back to this once I finish all of my school works as I am a third-year student and my schedules are incredibly overwhelming. I don't have much time yet to write. However, maybe after a month or two, I'll get back to you guys. I also want to really have a break from Yang Lujia's story. By the way, I am also working on another novel. It's called, "Awakening: The Dark Polaroid". If you're interested and have some time to spare, you can check it out. It's a novel whose premise I found interesting Thus, I decided to begin writing it despite my busy schedule and while I'm on a break on Origin Court. There are still many mysteries to unveil in the novel (OC). Stay tuned! Thank you for your understanding.

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Hello, everyone! I appreciate those people who came to pass by my first cultivation story I wrote. I hope you enjoy reading the story as much as I do while writing it! ((((:

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