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2022-07-08 03:51

I am at Chapter 70 now. So far, the story has been good. Writing Quality: There are definitely things that you may question from the start. However, I realized subconsciously that they are being slowly realized as the novel goes on, but as these are realized, new mysteries would also come in. As for the writing quality, I could barely see any mistakes on the chapters all throughout. The writing was pretty decent, so far. Stability of Updates: Fellow Daoists, you definitely have nothing to worry about this. The author updates every day. Only in June when he did not because I think he gave himself some break (?)... Story Development: His first disciple's plight seemed so simple compared to the second arc with his second disciple already involved. However, that should how the story progresses. At least to me. In the beginning, it is quite boring but the later chapters (i meant chapter 50 and above, i think) were not. With this, there was development going on. Character Design: I am a bit confused when it comes to Yang Lujia. He's got a twisted personality but he's smart. According to the chapters I have read, I think it's got something to do with his conflicting emotions of trying to change himself but would always end up doing so badly in these terms. I look forward to the reason why he is being like this. World Background: In the beginning, it was really vague to me. However, as the story continues, it seems like it slowly becomes clearer to the mind. Even the descriptions were topnotch (to me). I don't know about you, ofc. But I would highly recommend this for those who loves an overpowered main character. The "weak to strong" concept does not apply here. From the very start, he's already overpowered. I also just wonder why he became overpowered over just a short period of time. Keep it up, authorrr! Honestly, this has the potential to become famous. Hehe.

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thefirespeaks
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Hello, there! Author here! Hear me out, you guys. If you hate a main character that kills without reason right off the bat, from the earlier chapters of the story until at most a hundred and ten, then this novel is not for you. That's because I wanna leave some gap for him to realize what he was doing all this time, given his previous life on Earth—being some type of villain. No matter how he said he's gonna change his ways, he can't do that overnight as it's engraved in his soul—the way how he always did things on Earth—plus the fact that he grew old with those ways. Relate this kind of characterization to your habits. They're not gonna change instantly just because you tried changing them or by saying you'd change them. He's a hypocrite and so are we. Be realistic. You're too fed up with your type of main characters who is smart or wise at the beginning of the story. If you like such type of novels, then again, Origin Court is not for you to read. As for his overpowered strength, do you think he's strong because his system has a bug or he's just one of those protagonists who become strong for nothing? Really? Think it over. Moreover, don't be an idiot to think that this is a weak-to-strong novel, because I saw a review here that said that. I deleted it because it wasn't helpful at all. Also, let's talk about the "romance" in this story. There are barely few of them of which most are coming from the side characters, just fillers. The main character himself, on the other hand, never liked having lovers from the start because he grew old on Earth without marrying. There is a reason for that as well. It was vaguely mentioned actually, if you got what I tried to imply there. Otherwise, I must have failed to write it properly. Nevertheless, I just want to say these things. All in all, this novel will matter in terms of your reading preference.

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