not the best but a good start for a newbie...I have hopes for your future writing...I have noticed your way of writing is interesting...I am surprised you haven't dropped this fic like the many others...consistency matters even if you right badly...take care author...Next time develop your story well instead of rushing to make MC op from the start
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