Review Detail of Kisshot in Traversing The Omni-Realities

I really liked the change in attitude the MC had in the last few chapters and it deserves the praise that you can take criticism into consideration and improve your writing, it's your first novel so no one should blame you for that. Also, the fact that you will only take a maximum of 4 girls from each world raises my expectations a lot, we all want to see sweet interactions and go deeper into their personalities and history, I read in another review that you wanted to create OP characters to counterbalance the MC, personally, I don't recommend it as it's not to anyone's liking.