Review Detail of Versatile_Jack in King of succubus

Item: King of succubus
Rating: 5

Review detail

Versatile_JackLv32yrVersatile_Jack

It's a really interesting novel. The only problem is the childish and idiot personality of the mc that will be corrected in the advanced chapters! For my part, I can say nothing but congratulate the author for his hard work! And also, some grammatical mistakes that he really has to correct! Another point I loved... was the personality of his maids. Especially that of Nicco.

King of succubus

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SilverCrowLv13SilverCrow

Mc is not childish,he is proper and utterly pathetic trash... I've been trying to read this work about 5-6 times and i can't force myself too go more than 30 chapter...this story have hood premises but this idiotic MC ruining everything[img=faceslap]

1yr

Super_userLv13Super_user

The childish Mc is too much from me I can't continue this

1yr

Theghost_Lv4Theghost_

Same here. You atleast got to 30.

SilverCrow:Mc is not childish,he is proper and utterly pathetic trash... I've been trying to read this work about 5-6 times and i can't force myself too go more than 30 chapter...this story have hood premises but this idiotic MC ruining everything[img=faceslap]

1yr