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2022-09-11 06:16

Pretty good concept could be executed better for sure but the main problem is how it feels like a cheap knockoff translator was used to write the whole thing… Its so bad it makes you think it was done on purpose so yea extremely broken English borderline unreadable

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The protagonist is like a child in the body of an adult, he simply has no justifiable reason to be so foolish and reckless. The mc before he transmigrated was 27 years old not a child, to give context to what I will say below. I understand that his experiences in his past life created insecurities in relating to people but it doesn't justify him hurting himself even when he is told that what he is going to do is dangerous because he is too weak. The author tries to make you empathize with the protagonist but personally I find it impossible to empathize with the mc because everything that happened to him is his fault and it was pure recklessness not to say stupidity (I won't say what happened because it's spoiler). I just can't find a justifiable reason for the mc to be so stupid. His act of self loathing is pathetic to say the least. In the words of the author the mc feels "guilt, rage, disgust, contempt, despair, hatred, anger and panic... all these feelings were directed at himself" all because of something the mc did to himself (I won't say why because it's spoiler... something really stupid), the point is... the mc transmigrated I feel like a nobody and when all the drama of being an idiot happened he went back to being a nobody, again, it just doesn't make sense all those negative feelings. I read until chapter 22 where according to the author "the true story" begins, so my opinion is limited to that chapter. That criticism aside, if we leave out that the mc up to chapter 22 is silly, this novel is good give it a chance if you can ignore that. Sorry if some of what I wrote doesn't make sense, English is not my native language.

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