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Item: What the hell is wrong with my disciple's
Rating: 5

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Mohd_Ahmad_1865Lv12yrMohd_Ahmad_1865

I love this type of novel hope you will not drop this and update it regularly, writing quality is good and character design is also very good 😊😊

What the hell is wrong with my disciple's

Y2WBigBrother

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Y2WBigBrotherAuthorY2WBigBrother

Thanks

2yr

ABananaStoleMyDogLv12ABananaStoleMyDog

Bruh you clearly haven’t read it if you think the writing quality is good. Grammar can make or break a story and it breaks this one. Although the grammar is all over the place the most glaring issue is capitalization and spaces after periods.

2yr