Not for me i guess, i am dropping became of the unrealistic decisions made by the author i mean who in the right mind would choose 10000 points in something as useless as charm and upgrade it to SSS while his rest of the stats are in D even when you know someone is trying to kill you. PS. Giving 3 stars because its free to read

it feels like im reading a chine translation with expressions like"licking dog". the mc makes way too many dumb choices. like trying to sell literature in one piece to make money instead of just using his god lvl drawing skills to auction his paintings through his father anonymously. then he sells enhanced armor to the marines like they are not going to try and monopolize such an asset

It looks like a Chinese novel with all the cliches there are, the skills that the system gave him are very convenient so they don't seem random, the system has a better personality than the mc, I'll give him a chance because he's one piece.

Though you have uploaded only a few chapters now I am already loving it. (I love your Naruto Fan- Fiction) . The MC has a unique background and is smart. The MC has a unique Devil Fruit. I hope he remains a Merchant and becomes the richest as well as the strongest man in the world. . Thanks for sharing this with us Author-san. Please upload more chapters. I wish I could give you more than 5 stars.

good premise, bad execution. a wasted opportunity. system talks too much. some inconsistencies. i couldn't read much. maybe it gets good later on, but it doesn't seem like it. you can still give it a try.

Nice book. I will like some more chapters. Also is he going to be a pirate or a merchant because I will like him to be a merchant cause I have only seen 2 books were the mc is merchant in one piece but they are all dropped. Correct number of stars now.

I'm a massive fan of your other novels. ( the side character and teacher one ). so obviously I'll support you in this as well. I already like where this is going since the mc is not bootlicking and has a decent head on his shoulders. nice choice on the devil fruit. always thought it had tremendous potential. hope the chapters are a little longer but you do you. keep up the amazing work.💙

Unoroginal idea, kind of interesting but would get boring very fast if it’s not writting at great quality. Grammar and vocabulary is like a chinese novel. Not much else to be said

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