I'm giving my own work 5 stars. Yes, I'm that shameless, but an honest review from you guys would be appreciated. I'm actually quite nervous because my reader probably wouldn't like this work, but I'm trying my best to walk out of my comfort zone Well, Peace Out!

Good read, although not completely unique or something the execution is good and it's ATG fanfic so i am already a bit biased. Although i would only give it 4 stars as MC's personality seems a bit shaky with him being calm and kind sometime and manipulative at the other also the fact that some of mc's decision seems like bit forced so that plot can be followed but not something that is too out of place. Overall a good read.

i have to say if nine has written it,it will be good I just hope that the mc uses primordial energy to cultivate so that he can reach creator god realm early

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The first few chapters were good, but then the mc became a manipulator, spoiling the story for me. Honestly, what he did to Princess Snow in this chapter was unnecessary and meaningless. I don't even know if I'm going to continue reading this story since the mc's personality is manipulative garbage. Please tag villain or manipulative mc so as not to mislead readers like me who don't like this type of mc.

In cultivation novel yet you give the MC a Japanese name, are you serious? It's like reading Naruto fanfic with Chinese MC name. You ruined the immersion when reading the story.

Since webnovel was given the fantastic idea of ​​continuing to send everything to its app, you can no longer enjoy the story and/or other stories better because the advantage of being able to read it on PC is because of the translator, but without a translator it is impossible in the app, that on top of that they screw you they can't put a translator to help you visualize puff. --------------------------------- Desde que webnovel se le dio la fantástica idea de seguir mandado todo a su app ya no se puede disfrutar mejor la historia y/o otras historias porque la ventaja de poder leerlo en pc es por el traductor pero sin traductor es imposible mas en app, que encima que te joden no pueden poner un traductor que te ayude a visualizar puff.

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hey, im just wondering, are going to multiverse in this fanfic? or just remain on ATG. Because your cover seem like from genshin, Raiden Ei to be exact.

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