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Review Detail of Lunar_Light in Start With Selling Devil Fruits in Marvel

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Dropped around 48~ It has no depth or whatsoever, the story telling at first feels like you listening someone narrating his story beside bon fire, then focusing on the superheroes, while the mc literally got neglected, i don’t have a single clue about the store, how mc oparate it, how its experience as costumer, how its look, what kind of conflict there is, and how the mc solve them, it just got skipped and a simple summary at the end, and then it back “normal” but still on heroes perspective… yeah no

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Start With Selling Devil Fruits in Marvel

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