Review Detail of streek135 in Start With Selling Devil Fruits in Marvel

Item: Start With Selling Devil Fruits in Marvel
Rating: 3.4

Review detail

streek135Lv142yrstreek135

Cool idea, but the English is so broken I feel like I’m loosing brain cells the more I read. …..…..…..…..…..…..…..…..…..…..…..…..…..…..……..

CosmicMystery

Liked by 23 people

CosmicMysteryAuthorCosmicMystery

i can't proofread my own work. And as a beginner there are many mistakes. As I get more proficient, the mistakes will reduce.

2yr

Mr_Ink2065Lv14Mr_Ink2065

Its not that hard to read in my opinion. I think you are doing well.

CosmicMystery:i can't proofread my own work. And as a beginner there are many mistakes. As I get more proficient, the mistakes will reduce.

1yr

The_Anonymous_UserLv4The_Anonymous_User

is there romance?

CosmicMystery:i can't proofread my own work. And as a beginner there are many mistakes. As I get more proficient, the mistakes will reduce.

1yr

sagepotatoOAALv4sagepotatoOAA

bruh u should let someone like me or smthin to check Ur work and make it up to date or fix spelling error xX

CosmicMystery:i can't proofread my own work. And as a beginner there are many mistakes. As I get more proficient, the mistakes will reduce.

1yr

acasualreaderLv4acasualreader

it reads more like a report than an actual story.

1yr