Review Detail of NataliaMeza in The Hysteria Scythe

Thank you so much for the review. I know this might sound a little harsh, but First, on several occasions, I have stated that the Main Character is a 12-year-old girl. I don't give much information about the main character because, firstly, it isn't an extremely common thing in first-person books because when you are talking to someone do you randomly say "hello how are you today, I have brown hair" and "I am glad you are well, I am tall" there is no effective way to describe the main character without making it weird, which is why I have to take that part slow and natural. You don't introduce yourself as "I am a 12-year-old, a girl with black hair and blue eyes, and I am 5'2'', my name is Anna Something" I am glad you like the details and hope you continue to read, Chapter two should be out tomorrow. Sorry if I sounded rude.