Review Detail of Mr_Morning_Star in The Hysteria Scythe

Item: The Hysteria Scythe
Rating: 4.2

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Mr_Morning_StarLv112yrMr_Morning_Star

Honestly has potential, it's a good read although it could use some more formal speech. If the whole point is to be a monologue of a necromancer talking to himself than it's perfect. Wish the author the best, and more to come!

The Hysteria Scythe

RaiyAkumu

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RaiyAkumuAuthorRaiyAkumu

The narrator, whom of which I already titled several times as a 12-year-old girl, is not talking to herself but the reader. It isn’t that obvious of a fact and am sorry I didn’t make it clearer. I would write more formally but since this story is from a 12-year-old I want to keep the story the way it is. I hope this cleared up a bit. Also thank you for the review, I appr it.eciate

2yr

Mr_Morning_StarLv11Mr_Morning_Star

Than it is more than understandable. Keep up the great work and I wish you the best!

RaiyAkumu:The narrator, whom of which I already titled several times as a 12-year-old girl, is not talking to herself but the reader. It isn’t that obvious of a fact and am sorry I didn’t make it clearer. I would write more formally but since this story is from a 12-year-old I want to keep the story the way it is. I hope this cleared up a bit. Also thank you for the review, I appr it.eciate

2yr