Bro what I with the writing there are a lot of words in the English language use them, author. There isn't much to learn about MC only that his sister is taken by elves somewhere we need more information on MC to care about him. Please give us more stories about the world so it feels reals author. Also, author your updating speed sucks write the chapter faster that is all my complaints for now.
Midnight_230
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LIKEmeme_ink:Did you just reply to your own book and pretend to be another person and do you also realize that we can see your the author of the book