chapters are way to short, even with the unless re-caps, and run on sentences that feel like they are put in just to extend the content. Author needs to trim these down loose the recaps, and put more appropriate content and thought into the chapters. the stories isn't completely trash the potential plot line if he takes his time and improve he writing could make it a pretty good read. but I am dropping this one.
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