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Review Detail of MLakuru in Dimensional Group Chat as the Sorcerer Supreme (A Non-Harem Fan-Fic.)

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Other reviews already stated this but I might as well say the same thing just so my review can give some balance to the other 5 star reviews who only care that it's not harem. Long story short the author wrote the end of the story in the first few chapters then went on to enjoy life of the mc afterwards in a slice of life style. No details or plot just the epilogue. Then after the tourney arc we get some weird bs chat room arc and a random god he needs to kill because his mom was murdered and he needs power. But for such a serious goal for the mc you used a slice of life fun thing like a chat room for his power trip? This whole story is such a mess and the author clearly doesn't know what he is doing even if he thinks he does. SPOILER - Adding Anya from SpyxFamily into the chat room was a big mistake. Not to mention Iruma is also annoying and a bad character to add. You have an infinite number of characters from everywhere to choose from, im sure you can find actually decent and likable characters to pick from.

Dimensional Group Chat as the Sorcerer Supreme (A Non-Harem Fan-Fic.)

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