Review Detail of GotaDeAgua in Umbrus Shade, The Incredibly Annoyed Ravenclaw

Item: Umbrus Shade, The Incredibly Annoyed Ravenclaw
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GotaDeAguaLv41yrGotaDeAgua

I don't want to waste time giving you constructive criticism, only that the protagonist revealed everything to Dumbledore.... The end! . . . .

Umbrus Shade, The Incredibly Annoyed Ravenclaw

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MaybePotomLv2MaybePotom

the main problem is that MC tried to reveal everything to Dumbledore, not Dumbledore knowing plot

CodeSpectre:Did you even read the story ?? While the mc tried to reveal everything to Dumbledore,it didn't work since he hears completely different unrelated things....

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CodeSpectreLv4CodeSpectre

Did you even read the story ?? While the mc tried to reveal everything to Dumbledore,it didn't work since he hears completely different unrelated things....

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AvengerVLv4AvengerV

Really ? You read the same thing that me ?

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GotaDeAguaLv4GotaDeAgua

Okay, here I go... In the first few chapters he mentions that old evil Dumbledore, subsequently his attempt to reveal all contradicts his words. I'm going to read it again and give constructive criticism.

AvengerV:Really ? You read the same thing that me ?

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free_lifeLv5free_life

Well, thank you. this is the best review I've ever found ... ❤

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GotaDeAguaLv4GotaDeAgua

HP魔法传记无限之至尊巫师哈利波特之渡鸦之爪冠冕下的荣光哈利波特之血獵者 Maybe some of these harry potter novels you might like, "attention" are very hidden titles that I haven't read yet.

free_life:Well, thank you. this is the best review I've ever found ... ❤

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free_lifeLv5free_life

thanks, I'll check them out

GotaDeAgua:HP魔法传记无限之至尊巫师哈利波特之渡鸦之爪冠冕下的荣光哈利波特之血獵者 Maybe some of these harry potter novels you might like, "attention" are very hidden titles that I haven't read yet.

1yr