Item: Umbrus Shade, The Incredibly Annoyed Ravenclaw
Rating: 3.4
Author: Zikiziki

ZikizikiLv112yr

2022-08-20 09:11

It's pretty basic HP fanfic with an OC MC. It has two plot-lines going on. One MC learning magic, and while his starting point isn't great, it doesn't take long for him to start getting OP. Though there isn't any secret to it really other than him putting in most of his time and effort that a lazy child wouldn't. And room of requirement. (overall this plot-line is very basic but well executed) The other is MC dealing with the problems that come from the canon storyline. And well... things go very smoothly for him all the time. I will give it some props for MC dealing with stuff himself, rather than baby sitting Harry Potter like most fanfics do, but nonetheless, the ease at which MC deals with each problem without any problems arising make it boring. So ultimately, I would settle for this being rather average HP Fanfic, though someone that didn't read many HP fanfics could probably appreciate it more than me who read through this formula several times and seen better.

Umbrus Shade, The Incredibly Annoyed Ravenclaw

OmnipresenceBeing

4.4

154 Chs

Liked by 13 people

Replies11

_BruhLv13

any recs?

2yr

Magus_MxviilLv3

Recommendations please..

2yr

VoidZLv14

Read Oddssey Of A Mage one of the best hp fanfics there is

_Bruh:any recs?

2yr

_BruhLv13

i cant seem to find it is it on webnovel

VoidZ:Read Oddssey Of A Mage one of the best hp fanfics there is

2yr

aditya_shiluLv4

Read it on fanfiction.net It's really good one of my favourite hp fanfic. There are literally more than 700000 hp fanfic on fanfiction.net

_Bruh:i cant seem to find it is it on webnovel

2yr

VoidZLv14

Search it up on google and you will find it

_Bruh:i cant seem to find it is it on webnovel

2yr

IseeyouLv15

You could try “When the roses bloom again.” Fanfic.net Its not for everyone but its decent. Harry Goes back in time and he fights in trench warfare and other stuff.

_Bruh:i cant seem to find it is it on webnovel

2yr

Lucifer7030Lv5

what is the pairing or is there any?

aditya_shilu:Read it on fanfiction.net It's really good one of my favourite hp fanfic. There are literally more than 700000 hp fanfic on fanfiction.net

2yr

SorceinLv3

The pairing is female Voldemort, I highly recommend this fic is my top 3 harry potter fanfic and has over 800k words. A summary, the mc and the female riddle trying to dominate the wizarding world, the mages in this one are much more powerful than it originates

Lucifer7030:what is the pairing or is there any?

2yr

FlaminfiendLv4

"Harry Potter the mutant obscurus gamer" is pretty good it has good grammar, good story, and it has a lot written.

_Bruh:any recs?

2yr

_BruhLv13

i found that kinda boring and dropped ig harry potter fics arent for me anymore every new fanfic is like a rehash of an idea that has already been done

Flaminfiend:"Harry Potter the mutant obscurus gamer" is pretty good it has good grammar, good story, and it has a lot written.

2yr

Other Reviews

alexny18111Lv13

This is actually a good story. Not every Hp fanfic needs to have a character that is extremely talented from the get-go at everything. Also while I can agree that certain actions from the protagonist touch on the "forbidden list" of stuff to do in an HP fanfic, I don't think it detracts from the story.

2yr

f3f3Lv14

This is the fanfic that make me star reading others HP Fanfic’s. Is great that i can read it again in web novel format. Hope that you ask permission from the author.

2yr

DeathlessInfinityLv4

This is a gem and I just couldn't leave it on average rating of below 4. Basically it's an entertaining read with a funny mc that leaves you appreciative of his stupidly clever ways of solving problems.

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DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Reveal spoiler

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ChaddtsLv1

The worst hp fanfic I have ever had the misfortune to read. Magic has 0 explanation or depth. The m.c can't tell anyone of the knowledge he has , yet he can do things somehow which contradicts itself. For example he tries to tell dumbeldore the future and something like fate or destiny prevents Dumbledore from hearing him ,but he hears something else instead?? We aren't even told what Dumbledore heard exactly. Just the mc goes on about the story of h.p and Dumbledore go uh huh uh huh Them ok bye..... like wtf?.there is tons of handwavium going on throughout this book.. I don't understand how anyone likes this book at all. It's a contrived mess that makes me wish ill upon the original author. Its straight trash. The only redeeming quality is the actual writing. The story itself makes little to no sense. Don't waste your time reading it or trusting the fake reviews. The story will irk anyone with a logical mind.

2yr

ktumLv4

I like the story...MC is odd don't do think that he don't want and tell dumbeldore everything but get dismiss by a candy...well push those thing aside it's nice story but lack of something that I don't know

2yr

DaoistZlQoLqLv3

Its really funny espesialy how the mc's expectations fail again and again...................................................................

2yr

Niloy_DasLv4

One of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have ever read(I have read a lot including pretty much all of the ones available in this site).

2yr

Lord666AcediaLv5

I remmber reading this on ffnet or spacebattles long time ago if youre the same author good, otherwise you can basically read this whole thing on one of the 2 sites, just google its a completed story

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