Review Detail of Blue_Robin in The Puppet MC: Adriel’s Life is Controlled by Everyone Around Him
Review detail
It's pretty hard to read most of the time. The Pov's are confusing and constantly changing. There is missing info so most of the conversations don't make sense. The plot premise also doesn't hold up very well. It looks like someone went through trying to edit it, failed miserably after messing everything up, and then just left. It's readable if you want to push yourself to your minds limits like a shounen protag but hey I'm not going to. It might get better if author starts reading over what he writes and stops doing things like repeating the same chapter twice. 1.5/5 since it can still be read. Barely.
The Puppet MC: Adriel’s Life is Controlled by Everyone Around Him
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Carrara:I understand your bad review, English isn't my first language so I had to learn by myself I use Grammarly for this part
I can tell this probably a better read in its original language, but it still, even then, needs substantial work.
Carrara:I understand your bad review, English isn't my first language so I had to learn by myself I use Grammarly for this part
when I wrote the first 3 chapters I used a website that changed the whole meaning of the sentence when I was going to correct the grammar, for some reason it deletes some lines too but I have replaced them
Blue_Robin:Ok but that doesn't cover the second the chapter where it repeated over.