Item: Tales of the Kingslayer
Rating: 5

One_Winged_AngelLv152yr

2022-04-07 11:38

Writing Quality: Almost flawlessly written! The grammar, punctuation, flow, and tenses are superbly written. There is next to no spelling errors and is written in such a way that draws you in and keeps you wanting more. Updating Stability: As there is only 4 chapters at the moment, the novel is rather new so not much to be said in this department. Story Development: The story is filled with twists and turns and keeps our MC constantly on the move. Excellent writing makes the story intriguing and gives plenty of room to theorycraft and wonder what is going to happen next. Absolutely amazing story so far. Character Design: The MC is a unique one and the author does an excellent job bringing him to life. The supporting cast is growing and each character is unique and varying. World Background: By far the authors best point! The world is alive and creative. His use of exposition paints a masterfully crafted world that brings you into it. You can vividly picture where our MC is and the worlds are beautifully described. Completely worth your time and investment and I am excited to see where the story goes and what the author has in store for our MC. Absolute masterpiece in the making!

Tales of the Kingslayer

Aliast

4.7

74 Chs

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AliastAuthor

Hi, readers! Just a warning. I love epic stories with underlining plot themes and character developments over time. So, I don't do fastpaced story. It's going to get pretty slow for this typical genre. And, despite being a fantasy novel, I want to keep any reactions/actions taken by my MC to be as logical as possible. Apologies for any typos/editing issues. Feel free to point out any writing mistake you may see. In fact, I'd be more happy if you do, so I can improve my writing. I very much welcome comments and reviews, or anything you can offer, really. Even clicking to read is truly appreciated. Thank you for beginning this journey.

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1Sword2PeaksLv3

I really liked the way the author uses descriptive words to pain a vivid picture of the world and the characters around it. Setup is unique and captures your imagination with just the first couple of chapters. Heon is an intriguing character that makes you want to learn more about him. The grammar is flawless, however the long paragraphs can be a bit obtuse sometimes. Tl;dr, this book is absolutely worth a try at the very least. Give it a shot! Keep up the good work author!

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KinshikanataLv2

another book that made me feel this way on webnovel, I read a lot of book but one with the aura of being something new and ending somewhere worthwhile this book got it, the descriptions are enjoyable, the characters are 3D I can feel the world writer's trying to show, after Fusion Reincarnation this book will be the one I will look out for most author hope you keep up the good work~

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DMC_MAXLv3

Ok, this is... interesting. The intro of the story is very intriguing and interesting... In other words: I am hooked! Reasons: 1.The MC has a strong character (Kind that I like) 2. Premise of the story: "How the MC was chased by a cloak, death of his friends and the deal" was extremely interesting, although there are some mistakes there. 3. Writing quality and pacing is just right, except for some minor errors... everything is great. Haven't finished the short book yet, but from what I've been seeing so far... Good job, Aliast!

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SenorSleepLv10

The story is very descriptive. The author used every word in their arsenal. But I recommend that the author should space out the large lard of paragraphs.

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CYPHER_OCTAGONLv2

The plot is awesome, a good novel that's for sure, the intro was amazing. I'm waiting for more chapters. The characters have some depth to them, even though there's only four chapters. An amazing piece of work

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SIENDONIALv4

This book has a very good use in the writing style, the grammar selection is also good, and the story development is also amazing. However, I think there is a bit problem about the title of this book (imo) Maybe it can be changed to something more interesting

2yr

HarlyboyLv3

If anyone told you that the grammar in this book is bad... Then they are terribly wrong or simply don't understand English. I haven't found any words that I stumbled upon which meant there is no mistake in it. From early on, the story threw you a gigantic hurricane that swept in your face LITERALLY. To the character at least. But you get the idea. It's one of the best early starts I ever read. Keep it up, author!

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N_JadeLv11

Omg such a beautiful novel! I love how the author explains the worlds that Heon is in. Such a great novel, please post more! We need more!

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