Review Detail of Write_D_Words in The Heatherland

Writing Quality: Since the book has just begun, I would like to say that this would be good for those slow pace readers. In my opinion, the way it started was good however, reading to much He got me...uhh. Maybe try to remove the he and make something out from it. The author focuses on what the person was doing which for some readers it would be...uninteresting. Still , some would like this kind of writing. Readers have different preferences so just keep on writing! We all grow by writing more and reading. Stability : Full stars for it since the author is active. Story Development/Character Design/World Background: Since the quality was slow, developments would also be slow. It takes patience. The characters world background was a blurry progress but it can be handled well in the upcoming updates. Character design , I can not picture out yet aside from being young and living in the orphanage. Lets just see where this goes. Job well done!