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The pacing of the story is quite good. The paths of each charaters diverge then intersect directly in a singular flow/path. However, there are times where this aforementioned path is too direct which takes out the excitement on the plot. For example, FC wants to do this, and thus that very same scenario indeed happens on the next scene. The lack of unconventional obstacles that the FC had to improvise through denies us of the chance to see how she reacts at extra factors that she had not considered beforehand. Having said that, a direct plot line is still an effective approach to build up tension quickly and progress the story smoothly.