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Readerofbooks123
Readerofbooks123Lv43yr
2022-04-07 08:26

MTL read it. It was below average, the only thing it really had going for it was that the protagonist was a good guy, and some of the villians got to be redeemable, but turned into harem, ofc, and for someone born on earth, he became pretty arrogant and cliche very quickly. By the 200s of chapters, he mind controls some random girl (who in all fairness was contributing killing intent to him), and the first thing he has her do is massage his back for him, then not even a chapter later, holds hands with some girl, decides she is his woman, and he will be ruthless to anyone who even thinks about her...yeah not my cup of tea. If this is picked tho, can translator not repeatedly call some of the girls who end up in his harem little girls? Like over and over they are called little girls, then they contribute eroticism/lust to him, so Im thrown off bc their actions and how they speak are childish af, not how someone over the age of 12 would act. The MC, a 17 year old, calls them little girls, but then theyre freaking have s** dreams and lusting over the mc?? When they say little boy in this, they are always kids, 6 or 7, but when they say little girl in this, how old are they actually?? Rant over

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Wanderingimmortal
WanderingimmortalLv12

your description is right after reading it to 40 chapters in this It's become boring and bad

Readerofbooks123
Readerofbooks123Lv4

Exactly, I think I read to around 100 chapters, then skimmed to around 300 chapter, and he started off as interesting with his high EQ and ability to turn enemies into friends, then turned into a typical arrogant harem master. Sucks bc the idea was relatively unique compared to all the copy paste trial reads for the past few months

Wanderingimmortal:your description is right after reading it to 40 chapters in this It's become boring and bad
Crisapx
CrisapxLv5

I dropped even before ch 40. The setting looked so good, but then instead of expanding on his duties and stuff they straight up jumped to a tournament plot without him having worked a single day as a constable... Plus that ridiculous power creep that everyone could see and as good as ignored, in like 3 days he got exponentially strong

GrandpaPeng
GrandpaPengLv4

Thanks for your effort in writing the comment. Sometimes we lack objective people with spot on comments like yours from mtl. I can skip the novel peacefully and not waste my time on this, because like you, I also find the things you described ridiculous, cheers

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