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One_Winged_Angel
One_Winged_AngelLv152yr
2022-04-07 11:09

Writing Quality: The writing quality is phenomenal. The punctuation, spelling, grammar, all are really good and well designed. Next to no errors on the pacing, tone, and adjectives are well written and spread throughout the novel to give a nice variety without scaring the reader off nor boring enough to cause you to lose interest. Updating Stability: Posts daily and each chapter is a nice read that draws you in and leaves you wanting more. Story Development: The background of our MC is ambiguous and mysterious. How he was transported to this world, why he was sent there, and how come he has the system are all a mystery at this time. The plot progresses fast enough that it the story isn’t stagnant but not too fast to the point where you are lost with what is going on. Character Design: You have a wide range of supporting cast to choose from and each are unique and they are believable. The characters seem real and you most certainly will find at least one relatable character which is an amazing feat. The MC is not overpowered to the point where he is invincible, but can be kinda dense at times and this makes him feel relatable. World Design: The world is still very much a mystery but it’s absolutely expansive and the author has an excellent skill with exposition that just draws you in and brings you into the story. Absolutely excellent novel and it well crafted and willing to bet with time it will become one of the best novels on the platform. Don’t sleep on this novel, add it to your library and you will not be disappointed!

Monster Hunt Online: Fateless Child

Harlyboy
4.9
112 Chs

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SIENDONIA
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Good book sir, this book looks like a diamond hidden in a mine. From the writing style, story development, world background, and updating stability is all good. I hope you'll continued writing this book. Good luck sir :3 :v - SIENDONIA

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Herolich
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This is gold!!!! I read it like I saw the scene unfold before my eyes. Such a genius story telling. Go read, you won’t regret it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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WarrantyW
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Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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NinjaGoldenLala
NinjaGoldenLalaLv13

I have read a lot of MMORPG novel, and this one is good enough to be included to the library. The writing style is a bit confusing as he mixed 3rd and 1st POV, so that's a minus one star. However, the plot is interesting so you should give this one a try

2yr
Gorgy_Pok
Gorgy_PokLv2

Ahahaha I read it as a fatherless child not fateless lol ==================================*^^^^^**^^*^*^^*^^*^^*^^^*^^**^^**^^^**^^**^^**^**^^**^

2yr
Aliast
AliastLv2

I rarely like system novel, but this one seemed interesting. Indeed, it is. I like the actions written here, easy to imagine but no less fun. So much mysteries, both from the main character and the world itself, has yet to be revealed. It'd be worth the wait. Keep up the good work, author :D

2yr
N_Jade
N_JadeLv11

I normally don’t read novels like this but my boyfriend told me to read this one and I’m glad I listened to him! Harly does an excellent job painting the world around you and I couldn’t put my phone down until I read everything!! Everyone needs to read this book!

2yr
SumSumInTheDimSum
SumSumInTheDimSumLv11

Really great story! Aidan is awesome! Reminds me of a few novels on here that don’t perform nearly as well as this one! If you haven’t read this one, I highly recommend it!

2yr
Vova_Vevelala
Vova_VevelalaLv2

I am very impressed. The worldbuilding and the first chapter is the best. I was little bit confused at first, but man.... that was a good read. And it was fast-paced too. Immediately we are plunged into mystery and the world of monsters. Awesome!

2yr
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