Review Detail of Thiago_guedes in Idle Immortal
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clichés like killing enemies who will literally use you in ritual..... shhhh the great author who runs away from clichés... always better to let enemies plotting behind your back than to kill him... why not???? .... author: because it's too cliche to kill enemies hahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah literally pathetic.
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Is being in cap 41 good for you? much improved.... the son of the village butler became friends with the mc... forced marriage? (and by the way, is there anything more cliché?)... or the excuse not to kill everyone present who knows your power? because if they go after him he can kill them all... hahahaah bro did you write this thinking you were really running away from clichés? making everything a thousand times more irritating? in the conversation with the old man on the boat... I knew what would happen in the next chapter... he's not a psychopath to kill his enemies is he? Mr author without clichés.
yang_bot:you should really read some more chapters
Thiago_guedes:Is being in cap 41 good for you? much improved.... the son of the village butler became friends with the mc... forced marriage? (and by the way, is there anything more cliché?)... or the excuse not to kill everyone present who knows your power? because if they go after him he can kill them all... hahahaah bro did you write this thinking you were really running away from clichés? making everything a thousand times more irritating? in the conversation with the old man on the boat... I knew what would happen in the next chapter... he's not a psychopath to kill his enemies is he? Mr author without clichés.
He did not kill that old man because he wanted to use old man as extra income source. and he did not became real friend with anyone till now,he just spending his time exploring the city and using him as his guide. U should give some opportunity to this novel, this is author first novel so it will have some mistake,u can just point it so author can improve his writing.
Exodaus:really insightful review you made here and i think u did not read ch 62 u should review again
do you think i have to change my review... i don't think so, just because he gave the excuse of not killing them to use them as income... i still think it was better to kill them, not just them all clans and steal all of them... or just steal.
Exodaus:really insightful review you made here and i think u did not read ch 62 u should review again