I do believe his cheat is too broken, I want to see the MC work to get results, their cheats may help them remove limiters on talents but I want to see them work hard for their power. A good first attempt with passion but I feel that it has fallen into the same pit hole you tried to avoid.
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Thank you very much for your kind review sir. Yes, the cheat is broken as the story is still in its early stage. I myself am tired of reading brainless power-ups and mindless killings. This is why till now, there is no great ancestor or junior you dare scenario. The higher realms are somewhat different as you will see later in the story. This story is currently in its early phase, that's why I didn't introduce everything all at once so as not to overwhelm the reader. Again, thank you very much for reading this and leaving a review. Happy reading and take care.
Perhaps an idea for this is to make the MC practice in order to breakthrough, like if the MC breakthroughs to Seaheart layer 2 from 1, he has to learn the technique but the mindless practicing can be replaced by the system and he has to practice in order to allow the system to allocate the exp to the technique allowing for a MC who works for his power and do provide an origin to his system, like future MC gave the system to past MC and at the end of some stage the system goes away but leaves behind the peerless talent MC displays using the system. All of this can be taken with a grain of salt as I am not a writer but a reader, if you ever want to rewrite this story, take your reader's advice into account.
Hmmm... These are some good suggestions, but unfortunately, as you might have read later in the story, MC doesn't have any meridians or talent. He is entirely dependent on his plug-in. As for his future self giving him it,, I have a scenario that is even better than that. Hehe...
I have read some novel where peerless talent = system, i.e person gets peerless talent from heaven before the birth by measuring there karma, but a system is given by some higher being as heritage to continue his/her legacy. A system help mc to continue improving without difficulty,just like peerless talent as you may have read many novel a peerless talent mc doesn't have bottleneck. So system is just your talent like peerless talent given by higher power you can also say system is artificial talent.
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don't remember. i read it nearly 2 year ago.
u can read this novel. it has awesome story.
