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So far, the stability of updates seem to be very consistent, which is good. The writing quality is also decent and quite descriptive, but there are still quite a few grammar and punctuation mistakes. Of course, English is not the author's first language, but I would like to remind the author to stick with one tense as I saw it switch sometimes by accident. Other than that, the story development as well as the world background has been paced and portrayed well. The book is short right now, but has a lot of potential. I advise that the author thinks of maybe another objective for the MC as well, since I don't think the MC will be correcting his mistakes as the king the whole time? For instance, will he explore the origin of the system or maybe after he fixes the kingdom; he will explore the world or even conquer it? Anyways, good job to the author and good luck continuing the book! [img=recommend]