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Quit good I suppose ? Hazbin hotel is a vast world to portrate so adding OC is understandable. But the MC is (quite some time) a spectator of it's own story. Not dumb nor useless per se. But viewed as a background character. The story being at it's begining, changes and improvement are still possible. That is just my humble opinion. But nether less, I still quite enjoy the story. Please continue, and do not depresed, You have potential and improvement are visible.
Memories of the past (Hazbin hotel)
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Black_Horizon_1158 I do thank you for the comment seeing a comment that provides me with help and good critics makes me happy! With the Mc it is more of an intentional approach. I did not intend to make him as an Mc so why did I add an Oc? So that I just have a reason of doing everything else that led to the current chapters. I may start to concentrate the end more of the Oc which well the story is at a near end except I come with a new idea or make a season 2 because I saw many great ideas from comments if there are even good comments.