hola a todos escribir no es nada fácil si tienen recomendaciones ideas o cursos que me recomienden por favor díganmelo en los comentarios, y sobre esta obra es perfecta, como no va hacer perfecta si douma es el protagonista xD, el próximo capitulo será en dos días
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one of the only suggestions that I can give is that your Mc must guard this human subordinates since unlike Muzan he knows when the flower that he seeks blooms and unfortunately this is during the longest day of the year lol😂 . and he must recruit talented people and have allies like Tamayo and find inosuke in the forest next to his sect , , and the most important thing is that he must learn a breathing technique (I recommend defeating a cowardly demon slayer like kaikaku and to him force to learn to Mc)👍👍👍👍
don't talk you're seeing through a part of my plans jaja except kaigaku i hate kaigaku
personally I understand it a little (it is in the nature of human beings to think first of themselves and precisely to the survival)😔
mdr I'm too strong for guess and too bad for kaigaku👍👍👍
