Review Detail of Alvin_Celest in Ascension Of Kaelestis

Finally time to give my first shameless review. You readers might have already noticed this but in case you didn't, I'll just let you know that I have no experience of writing online. I used to write dramas for my school but they too were in a language that was very different from English. But I am trying to improve my writing as much as possible. That's all I had to say in my defence. Now when it comes to the story, you'll find several cases in the start where things just happen suddenly without much information and it might get confusing for a while but trust me when I say that by chapter 100 you'll get to know the reason why all of the things are so rapid for the MC and no it was not a mistake. I wanted the MC to fix this problem and I wanted him to be a confused mess. The story will take unexpected routes but when everything comes together it will be a spectacle to witness. I won't ask you to be patient and wait for some hopeful rain shower. So if you find it not worthy of your time you can leave any moment you want. Because at the end of the day it will be my fault that I couldn't entertain you. Thanks for reading this<3