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Item: TimeTravel--Multiverse
Rating: 2

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This story desperately needs to be proofread. I apologise for my harshness but this story would be so much better if it was in readable English. Maybe ask a friend to proofread before posting?

TimeTravel--Multiverse

Sunny070204

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Sunny070204AuthorSunny070204

Yeah sure. Thank you for your review. I will try to improve next time for sure

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