Review Detail of onemeterofsky in Lord of The Realms

The story has a fascinating take on the sci-fi setting and galactic explorations. The author set-ups the variables then mashes then them up on the succeeding chapters. The problem here, if you may, is that the set-ups done with the use of "*****" happens too often in a single chapter. This could lead to losing the momentum driven by the main plotline. Nonetheless gaining insight from different characters is a good technique especially if it's done properly..