Review Detail of JcnPeng in My Idarian Lover
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Good job on the editing. It's a lot better than before, a lot less obvious mistakes. The story is a bit hard to follow, because it swings around a lot. But I'm not a good person to judge romance, so that might be the reason. The character design seems quite good. But I would like to see what the characters look like, especially the MC. You are uploading more chapters recently, so that's good. Too early for world background, so I can't give a review on that.
My Idarian Lover
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My goodness, that's outrageous. How could I? I know, I didn't include her facial features before but I've updated the chapters now and made sure to include them. Imagine her with blue eyes and black hair with a nose that is slightly longer. Also, she is of darker skin tone, caramel. You will call her exotic at best but not beautiful as such was the case around 1920. As for the story being hard to follow, it's because I'm trying to show a glimpse of her life before transmigration and instead of including mundane tasks, I tried to include the more exciting events. I will try to make it smoother for a better reading experience. Thank you for the review, I truly appreciate it :)
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