Review Detail of LinleyChen in The Rebellious Son of Lucifer

Look, I'll be honest here, this fic is all over the place, MC starts off over powerful, context is given slapped in the face, not developed, and then character growth and relationship growth are nonexistent. And if they happen, that do it in such a way it is unbelievable and gives you whiplash. SPOILERS AHEAD. MC gets his wishes, completely forgets past life and current life matters the most, really acts like a 13 year old who just wants to punch things without explaining (MC PUNCHES ISSEI IN STOPPED TIME BECAUSE HE WAS OGLING HIS "CHILDHOOD FRIEND" THAT WAS NEVER MENTIONED), and if that is not happening, he's thinking with his third leg (LITERALLY FORGIVES A WOMAN WHO LOWKEY ENCOURAGED AN UNHEALTHY ENVIRONMENT AND LOWKEY ABUSED HIM THROUGH NEGLECTING), otherwise, what is happening is characters don't match with supposed backstories (GRAYFIA WHO SUPPOSEDLY HATED HIM ACTUALLY LOVES HIM LIKE A SON AND A MAN BECAUSE WHY THE F NOT). Then if that is not bad enough, character in latest chapter is treated like a joke (CALLED A TEENAGER WHO RECENTLY HAD MEMORIES SEALED AND IS PRONE TO VIOLENCE SIMPLY FOR FUN A "TSUNDERE"). And the reaction of the MC does not correlate with actual feeling on the matter nor current "development" (sarcasm) (HE GOES "GRR" LIKE A FANFIC VEGETA AND THEN IGNORES THEM BUT THEN ACTS LIKE CHILD, ACTUALLY WHINING FOR ALCOHOL IN HIS HOUSE) SPOILER/RANT OVER. Author has a lot of potential like good grammar and spelling, but is so bad at story development he recognizes it's rushed and yet wants to just end a monumental part of the story which it' main purpose should be the development of the characters and their relationships as a whole. 1.8, if only because he has good qgrammar and such.