A total disappointment of a novel. Started good and had great potential. Went downhill so fast. For example, MC started world war 4 cuz he hated Beta MC stories, among other things. 15 chapters in, dude is an absolute Japanese Beta MC. A total simp that let's multiple girls walk over him. MC is supposed to have great enimity and wants revenge against his father and his step mom hates him. MC does a complete back flip of personality in 1 chap. No reason at all.
JOJO99
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LIKEIn general, it was normal, although in my opinion the first chapter should either be rewritten or completely removed, but then it got better and then Grayfia appears in the story and the main character instantly becomes a rag. Although he initially showed timidity towards the girls, he could at least put them in their place if they press too hard, and here is a doormat and a henpecked man who won’t say a word across. So I read it and felt dumb. Moreover, it was extremely unexpected, especially after the words about how the main character hates her and everything like that, and here you have a doormat on which all the feet are wiped. A stunning transformation.