Review Detail of VioletIMthWy in In WSA

I must say right away that you intrigued me with the plot. The beginning is intriguing. It is interesting to find out what will happen in the future with the main character. And this is the first time I've seen someone become a father, all I've read is about mothers, daughters and sons. But I've never heard of my father. I also hope that the main character will surprise us with something else, especially the character. In any case, the plot is 5, and the grammar, I don't know, is fine. It's easy to read for me.