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The_Crimson_Abyss
The_Crimson_AbyssLv52yr
2022-06-02 22:07

The story seemed to be too forced. ..............................................................................................................................

Reborn in Boruto as itachi's son

i_am_augustus
3.3
54 Chs

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xlvlx
xlvlxLv4

I hope mc will stay anti-hero and have a lover (kaguya)

2yr

Dary_Dary
Dary_DaryLv1

the story is very forced [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
ZoneTail
ZoneTailLv5

▪︎ Writing Quality.............☆☆☆○○ - Slightly difficult to read. needs a lot of fixing. ▪︎ Story Development......☆☆☆○○ - Boring and slow progress ▪︎ Character Design.........☆☆○○○ ▪︎ Updating Stability........☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎ World Background.......☆☆☆☆○

2yr
monke6
monke6Lv4

the world development was vey bad. His mum was like an npc with no thoughts for herself and the he tries to kill sasuke for literally no reason, he couldve explained what he was doing and who he was and sasuke wouldve helped him and instead he decides to become the lord of the wave country which has barely been described so we dont know if it has become richer or not.

2yr
_Medeiros
_MedeirosLv2

The story is strange to say the least. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
Cinvera
CinveraLv2

so far in chapter 6 a nice story to pass the time but, a little boring at the beginning that can be easily fixed in the future, the note 3.8 stayed with the vision until this chapter and i'm sure in the future i will put a better note with the development of the plot.

2yr
God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14

its an interesting idea but it’s completely forced and skips so much and is confusing.

2yr
MkoPoland
MkoPolandLv1

Writing Quality 3/5 Stability Of Updates 4/5 Story Development 3/5 Character Design 2/5 World Background (its fanfic so its hard to mees it up) 3/5 Its not bad story. If you wont to kill your time you can read it, but its wierd story. If you are going to read that, youll see what im talking about.

2yr
Keiou_Owlo
Keiou_OwloLv3

The idea was good. It really was. But the story seems to have been written in a hurry. At one point it seems like he is reincarnated and at another he doesn't remember things. The story had potential, but the author wanted to do too many things at once and ended up stumbling.

10mth
Ziad_Mohamed_Sabry
Ziad_Mohamed_SabryLv3

The Story is so good and the mc is op and characters is so good and i hope you contiune and be fast more than that in upload chapters ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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