Review Detail of TempestDrift in A Saiyan in The MCU

Item: A Saiyan in The MCU
Rating: 2.6

Review detail

TempestDriftLv52yrTempestDrift

The pacing is a bit too quick and the characters and setting is a bit bland. The grammar isn't too bad but their are some mistakes, also the inner monologue gets too cluttered

A Saiyan in The MCU

Nanashi11

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Replies3

Konrad_The_FourthLv4Konrad_The_Fourth

Did it get fixed?

2yr

WalterHeisenbergLv4WalterHeisenberg

I also wanna know before i read this…….

2yr

TempestDriftLv5TempestDrift

I don't know, I stopped reading after a while. Too many negatives for me, I expect the story to at least be a coherent stream of words and grammar.

2yr