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Raging_Bu11
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2022-03-26 14:46

This story is good, though there are some mistakes here and there it's fine. The pacing is good as isn't really slow or fast, but it keeps it interesting. Updates are fine for now. Plus No-harem I think, which is good. For a fan-fiction it's really good. Mc is Interesting to me.(My opinion) Overall I will say you should read it. Good job Author, I will keep following this story[img=recommend] so good luck[img=update]

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AiLund
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yeah no harem for this one. I'm a part of anti harem faction hahahahahah, although it is an interesting watch hehehehehe you knah what I mean broooo. thank you for the review I hope I'll keep delivering the satisfaction you need

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mow
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I won't be unfair with rating this story even though i didn't really appreciate its direction as much, character design is the only one in which i ranked a 2 out of 5, and that is due to the MC acting more like a regular child would instead of a reincarnated person trying to act like one. That is one of the reasons i decided to drop this and as well as the pokemon talent thing it feels too wuxia for my taste with improving pokemon talent ranks and stuff i never really liked the pokemon fanfics that involved those. Now onto the other part i don't get why he developed such a quick relationship with his parents on just being there for a few days unless i guess he absorbed all of the bodies memories before appearing which i'd get but thats where the part of him acting way too childish, it just feels like a regular child and not a reincarnater trying to ACT like one. Using the excuse that he was a previous orphan might help a little since i'm going to assume he always wanted parental figures but it was never really explained if he assimulated with the memories or not(atleast in the early chapters) IMO he should still be disoriented from being reincarnated as even though he was a orphan and wanted parental figures he suddenly got yeeted out of his home world into this one and in the chapter it looks as if he had just arrived(it took the author explaining to me that he had actually been there for a few days for me to that part) .OR IM JUST DUMB AND I COMPLETELY MISSED THAT PART ENTIRELY. Anyway those two are the main reasons that i decided to drop the story as everything else doesn't seem that bad aside from the few gramatical mistakes that can easily be fixed by proof-reading.

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