Review Detail of bbugs61 in My Plunderer System

I just read the book all the way to "A date" and it is way too cringy. Like teenage angst type of deal. You can see the immaturity of the relationship of that Maria girl and the way it was written. Like seriously from treating Zach like baggage from the first in field, to being solely attracted to the MC because of his strength and what's up with the sob story that isn't even natural. And the way the MC acts is sooo cringy. I don't like reading about kids, I probably need to stick to older MCs or at least the reincarnated ones if they are young. Strangely in real life I wouldn't be surprised if girls like Maria date a guy just to increase their status in their family. I am a woman and I have seen, heard and read some pretty shitty stuff girls do. Some men can really be SIMP, they don't go for the girl next door and then cry when their trophy wife cheats on them. From experience the cold, snobbish girls don't change, they just hide it for love, or to achieve their goals etc. The MC relationships reminds me a lot of athletes who often end up with some super gorgeous girl who wouldn't have given them the time of day in the past. Some even only want to make a baby and get child support etc. But I guess that is the kind of relationship the author likes. To all their tastes. Besides the character designs I don't like (the homeroom teacher, etc. The characters acter weird or illogical sometimes), the story is pretty good so far, the writing quality ( I gave high marks). The world background is a little bite so so . But may be because he is still in school. I don't feel particularly like keeping to read , that is just because I am not the target audience. I believe teenagers, in particular teenage boys would love the book , the story, the romance.