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tortleLv32yr
2022-04-12 01:24

So first of all this has everything I was expecting from author's pov in first 250 chapters lol. Writing quality is good, there are some things which can be improved...but they are almost negligible while reading. World building is nice, I currently completed free chapters and planning on continuing this so I dont know much but till now, world settings and development looks good enough. Character design is somewhat arguable as I like mc he is somewhat arrogant but he knows what he is doing and is taking advantage of his world knowledge as an former author. He doesn't act childish, not many stupid mistakes (there are some but sustainable). So if you like strong mc character this can be a good read for you. Now leaving mc aside, some other characters need improvement in there interactions, like the first princess, gate lady or dwarf for example they lack emotions if that make sense. Anyways author is excellent with response so I am sure you can interact with him if there's anything you wanna suggest or ask. update stability is good too. Lastly, what made it interesting is the plot. Although mc is strong...its still interesting because his enemy is on par too. Just give it a read, if title and synopsis caught your interest...you are going to like the stroy. ok cya, peace.

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Herolich
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Herolich
HerolichAuthor

Thanks for your effort to write this review. I'll keep improving any element on the story.

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Herolich
HerolichAuthor

And for the side characters, you mentioned there. It just so happens that they are not the type that talk too much. Baneth Wiley, you'll know more about her in the following few chapters. She's really cool, you'll love her. And as for Fokil, he was indeed a shy dwarf. And for the gate lady, you can simply ignore her, lol.

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tortle
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Herolich:And for the side characters, you mentioned there. It just so happens that they are not the type that talk too much. Baneth Wiley, you'll know more about her in the following few chapters. She's really cool, you'll love her. And as for Fokil, he was indeed a shy dwarf. And for the gate lady, you can simply ignore her, lol.
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